Advice to Subordinates Memo
October 23rd, 2010 | Published in Memo, Memorandum
A letter from a company officer giving advice to a staff member is usually written when the officer sees that a particular employee needs more guidance from their superiors in the performance of their duties. It can either offer corrective advice to staff members doing a certain task or give suggestions on how a particular job can be performed in a better manner. The most important thing to remember about this type of letter is that its ultimate intention is to help the employee improve their work performance, not to scold them or take them to task for perceived shortcomings.
The essential elements of this type of letter are the identification of the particular duty or task that needs improvement and the advice being given by the letter writer. It can begin with the writer assuring the employee that they are generally satisfied with their performance, and then continue by saying that however, they have noticed the following areas that could use some improvement. The rest of the letter then gives their advice on how to effect the improvements. The tone of the letter should be professional but not too formal, as the writer does not want to make the employee feel bad.
Below is a sample of a letter in which a supervisor gives advice to an employee.
Sample Letter
April 10, 2010
Nelson and Sons
Washington, D.C.
email@server.org
www.address.org
Janet Andrews
Logistics Department
Dear Ms. Andrews,
Greetings!
To begin, we would like to stress that in general we are satisfied with your performance in fulfilling your duties in the workplace. However, in the interest of making workflow in the office more efficient, we would like to offer to you the following advice.
We have noticed that when you are working, you place your pens and pencils too far to the right of your desk, such that you have to move your chair whenever you have to get a writing instrument. Perhaps you could save some time and work more efficiently by rearranging your desk such that the things you need at hand will be easier to reach.
We hope that you understand that this letter does not represent a reprimand in any way, nor is it a criticism of you, but is merely offered both for your benefit and that of the office.
Respectfully yours,
Randolph Stafford
Personnel Manager, Nelson and Sons